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Post by atrus on Jul 6, 2005 23:59:01 GMT -5
Ok,heres how I would like to start: What color is Uskiyas fur?
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Post by Uskiya on Jul 7, 2005 0:03:15 GMT -5
Greyish, she has a white stripe up her nose, but mostly she's just shades of grey with some white in her.
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Post by atrus on Jul 7, 2005 0:20:19 GMT -5
Ok,I have some names for Uskiya: The grey kerl, The grey fae, the dark-pelted beauty, or... The Mate Of The Insane Varg/Rouge/Kerl who was seduced by Ember Lily. Lol.
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Post by Uskiya on Jul 7, 2005 0:24:26 GMT -5
That's a long name. I'll probably skip that one cause I thnk it would take to long to write. But the others I like. Thanks, and seduced. I'm not gonna ask, nor do I want to know.
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Post by atrus on Jul 7, 2005 0:26:58 GMT -5
I was joking about the last one.It would be very embaressing if you typed that...
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Post by Uskiya on Jul 7, 2005 0:33:29 GMT -5
Hmmm, in that case maybe I should. Just kidding. Those are good though, for some reason I can't do that. Maybe I need to expand my reading horizon and read more. I have enough time to.
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Post by atrus on Jul 7, 2005 0:39:30 GMT -5
I used to be sort-of dislexic,which means that I couldn't read.Now,I read all of the time!
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Post by Uskiya on Jul 7, 2005 0:50:28 GMT -5
I like reading and all but sometimes I get to lazy and just don't. I've done that with two of my stories. Thats very bad of me.
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Post by atrus on Jul 7, 2005 0:58:32 GMT -5
Sometimes I just read random chapters in books instead of reading them from cover-to-cover.Occasionally,its more fun to read that way.
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Post by Uskiya on Jul 7, 2005 1:01:34 GMT -5
Can you read two books at once? I'm the only one in my family that can't. It just bugs me too much.
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Post by atrus on Jul 7, 2005 1:13:22 GMT -5
I can,but its hard for me to do.
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Post by Uskiya on Jul 8, 2005 15:29:00 GMT -5
Yeah, as with my other message in poetry I prpbably won't post here either. But to everyone: Thank you for your input and allowing me to do something I love(write) . IT's just easeier to post on one thing when your time is really consumed.
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Post by atrus on Jul 8, 2005 15:42:48 GMT -5
Your welcome for the input.
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Post by Farrah on Jul 16, 2005 13:05:04 GMT -5
Other words that you could use...well it depends on the setting I guess. If you're writing about a dark colored wolf, for instance, that is blood stained and struggling to find water...you would write this (all the things in parenthesis could have been either he, his, or the wolf's name...I'll call him Deathfang...)
Deathfang wandered helplessly through the neverending forest, searching for the life giving water of which he had been deprived so long. Though (the dark wolf's) wounds were open and bleeding from(the) escape, he knew he must press on. Even taking a small nap could be the last closing of (the parched former-Dragga's) eyes. This must not happen...he must not die. His pack would be waiting for him back home and (the once powerful leader) could not let them go hungry. Though his name was fierce, it was not a self-appointed name. Deathfangs mother had given him the name on her death-bed, and (the humble and loving wolf) could not bring himself to change it.
I could go on for hours, but I won't. That's just one example. I did it quickly so I'm sorry if there are mistakes. Try to heed my advice. I did like the story though...all the same.
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Post by Farrah on Jul 16, 2005 13:12:33 GMT -5
I now realize that I kinda jumped from him being a kind leader to his mother's death bed...I should have had a better transition. Sorry....anyway, I'm tired and haven't slept more than 3 hours a night for the past week and a half. I've finally hit rock bottom. (I was on a church retreat and we had Christian Rock concerts and spiritual prayers and swimming pool's full of tears and sweat from jumping around so much every night. It was really really fun but I'm glad to be back. It was all the way in Atlanta, Georgia...a good 5 hour drive from here. I'm really, really glad to be home and be able to sleep. Just in case you were wondering/ there...It was GoldRush retreat and it was in Perimeter Church in Atlanta. That is one heck of a church! Their youth building was 3X as big as our whole church! And it had it's own school, coffee shop, bookstore...it was huge. I got lost every couple minutes! Anyway, if you were there, wasn't it awesome? If you weren't, you HAVE to go next year! It was a life changing experience. And, if you do go next year, I'll actually get to meet you in person...maybe.
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