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Crystal
Mar 4, 2005 16:11:16 GMT -5
Post by ~Crystal~ on Mar 4, 2005 16:11:16 GMT -5
CRYSTAL
PAST:Crystal has a haunted past. Her parents died in a forest fire. She only has three sisters left, she has yet to find them.... fur: grey/brown eyes: blue crystal attitude: proud, loving, loyal, looks up to her heros PARENTS: she never knew them, she was taken captive and escaped after the fire
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Crystal
Apr 22, 2005 12:50:13 GMT -5
Post by Midnight on Apr 22, 2005 12:50:13 GMT -5
You really need to add omre content to that and make your past more interesting. It's sorta dull and ....... boring.... sorry, I just think it needs more detail on the death of her parents and her capture. That's all. ;D
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