Post by Fenris on Aug 7, 2007 11:06:12 GMT -5
A lot of posts I see about contain a lot of simple sentences. Simple sentences can be good, sometimes they are necessary. But adding a few more complex sentences into your post can be a good idea.
For example, two simple sentences would be:
Shayla's legs ached. She sat down.
When it could be:
Shayla sat down, because her legs were aching.
Very simple examples here, but the two simple sentences make your post read very haltingly, and if your post has a nice flow to it, it's so much nicer for the reader. If you find yourself using too many simple sentences, think about adding to them.
For example, two simple sentences would be:
Shayla's legs ached. She sat down.
When it could be:
Shayla sat down, because her legs were aching.
Very simple examples here, but the two simple sentences make your post read very haltingly, and if your post has a nice flow to it, it's so much nicer for the reader. If you find yourself using too many simple sentences, think about adding to them.